this is the first draft of the voice over that we were going to use for our trailer.
"This is generally what you see if you go down the wrong road in wickford. Here you got two of the toughest criminals in England. But you have to understand Jason anit nothing without his car. After all he is only a driver.
Now Chris can get or set up anything he wants, not giving two shits. He is the dealer.
Murphy the Irishman. The loveable character. He can get in anywhere. Not sure how he does it half the time but he never fails.
Now I wouldn’t mess with Paul. They call him the gun. Not too sure why if im honest. I heard that’s because of the inventive ways he would hurt people with one. I try not to ask.
And hear is the shadiest is of them all. No one knows his name or why he done it. Maybe he was just bored. But he created pertshires finest."
Good, a good voiceover for your genre but it does resemble an opening sequence narration. I'm glad you amended it.
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